The
movie that I have chosen to analyze is The
Graduate, directed by Mike Nichols and winner of an academy award for best
director as well as six other nominations including best adapted
screenplay. It has stood the test
of time and become known has a classic.
This is due to Mike Nichol’s careful direction and the screenplay’s
strong structure
The
Graduate is a story about a recent college graduate, Ben Braddock, who has
found himself trapped in superficial or “plastic” world around him. When Mrs. Robinson, the wife of his
father’s business partner, advances on him, he, with hesitation, begins an
affair with her. This affair
becomes conflicted when he realizes he has strong emotions for Elaine, Mrs.
Robinson’s daughter. After
confessing of the affair to Elaine he finds himself at square one and
heartbroken. When Ben learns that
Elaine is getting married he takes arms against his troubles and manages to win
Elaine. The movie ends with the
famous shot of the two in the back of a bus with blank expressions on their
faces.
The
following analysis will examine the story from both a macro(scenes, characters,
sequences etc…) and
micro(framing, composition, symbolism, etc..) perspective to determine how the
structure manages to pull the audience in emotionally.
The
story focuses singly on the journey of one character, Benjamin Braddock and it is
structured in a way that he is in almost every scene and his actions drive the
story through the three acts. In
order for the audience to care about this character the audience must be able
to feel what the hero feels and be actively engaged in his decisions. This is
achieved largely through the careful shot selections and framing of the
camera. One will see that the
cinematography is rich with symbolism and is often placed in the point of view
of the protagonist causing the audience to feel the way that the protagonist
feels achieving a sense of empathy and support for the protagonist. To prove this point the direction and
cinematography will often be addressed.
The
Graduate begins with a close-up on Benjamin Braddock’s face. This immediately establishes the main
character. The shot zooms out to
reveal that he is on an airplane surrounded by bored, sleeping, expressionless
people. He blends right in. The following shot is Ben standing
expressionless on a moving walkway. The composure in his face is almost robotic, he resembles an
item coming down a factory line on a conveyer belt. He is about to return home to a world of superficial people
and this shot seems to be representing that visually. The shot lasts for over a
minute allowing for a careful observation of our protagonist. Yet this pacing
is intentional and works effectively for this story. The audience interprets that our protagonist is in a
daze. He seems lost or out of
place. He seems unhappy and out of
his element. This starts the audience
thinking critically about who Benjamin Braddock is. Not only does this slow pace allow the audience time to
think about the protagonist but also with the help of Simon and Garfunkel’s
relaxing score the audience is put in a somewhat sedated state of mind that
matches that of Benjamin causing a shared feeling with Ben.
Next,
is a shot of his bag going down the baggage claim. It passes a sign that says “Do they match?”. This introduces the major thematic premise. The movie is about Benjamin Braddock
feeling as if he does not fit in with the superficial world that he lives
in. The rest of the story will be
about his journey trying to find where he fits, finding where he feels
comfortable, finding his match.
Next,
there is a close-up Benjamin with the same blank expression in front of a fish
tank. This image of Benjamin being
underwater will continue throughout the movie as a motif implying that he is
trapped, being drowned in a world that he doesn’t want to live in. His father soon arrives and asks “what
seems to be the matter?”. Ben
replies “I don’t know. I guess its
about my future. I just want it to
be different”. The combination of
the fish tank behind Ben with Ben declaring his need for a different future
establishes Ben’s dramatic need.
In these first few minutes the audience has an understanding of who this
protagonist is on an emotional level.
The next step of establishing the world of this story is seeing Ben interact
with the other characters.
He
is thrown into a full house of family friends that all bombard him with
questions and conversation. The
fast pace and close framing of the camera is overwhelming and does not give Ben
or the audience a chance to breath.
This leads the audience to sympathize for Ben being stuck in this
situation and establishes that Ben is clearly out of place. It also establishes the characters in
this world of “plastics” as unlikeable.
At
this point the world of the story has been established. Ben has been identified as the one that
the audience should pull for--the hero of the story. he is in a place that
seems superficial and uncomfortable, and finally the dramatic need is clearly
Ben’s search to change his future and prevent turning into another one of these
“plastics”.
During
Mrs. Robinson urges Ben to drive her home from the party. She talks him into having a drink leads
him upstairs to Elaine’s room and eventually tells him “ don’t be nervous I
want to Benjamin I want you to know that I am available to you and that if you
won’t sleep with me this time I want you to know that you can call me up at any
time and we can make an arrangement”.
Ben is uncomfortable in this situation and repeatedly tries to get out
of it.
This
sequence resembles the story of Adam and Eve from the Old Testament of the
Bible in which a serpent(Mrs. Robinson) “slyer than in beast of the field”
tempts Adam and Eve(Benjamin) to eat an apple(adultery) from the forbidden tree
of knowledge(what society deems acceptable). Adam and Eve are both curious and interested to try this
forbidden fruit but are scared because they know that they are somewhere that
they shouldn’t be. Knowing that if
they were to try it they would be breaking God’s one rule for them and thus be
betraying what they must stand for.
Benjamin, just like this is tempted by Mrs. Robinson’s proposition but
his inclination for doing what’s socially acceptable and fear of the
consequences prevents him from
having sex with her. However, just as with Adam and Eve, the temptation will
linger in the mind of Benjamin.
This
is the “Refusal of the Call” aspect of the heroes journey. According to Joseph Campbell this is the “awakening of the self”(Campbell,
42). Ben has been introduced to
the world but is not yet prepared to take part in it. Mrs. Robinson is the “announcer of the advenure” who is
commonly described as “dark, loathly or terrifying…yet if one could follow, the
way would open through the walls of day into dark where the jewels
glow”(Campbell, 42). What this
means in this story is that she is the one who has called him to this adventure
and will be the cause of Benjamin finding a dangerous place, of which he may
find what he wants but also much conflict in between. Not only is she the
announcer of the story but at this point, the inciting incident we know that
she will act as the main form of antagonism for the rest of the story.
A
notable shot is of Ben through the legs of Mrs. Robinson. The shot visually shows him being
surrounded by her legs and he has a terrified look on his face. It tells the
audience that she is a symbol of sex/desire and he is seemingly trapped, within
her grasp. She is clearly the anta
When
Ben finally leaves the Robinson’s the audience feels relieved but then is
thrown right into the world of the plastics. In this scene his parents have him demonstrate his new scuba
gear. They without any regard for
his Ben’s feelings they coerce him to foolishly show off this new material that
has been given to him. This scene
is a major beat in the story because it is the collision of the Ben and the
pressures from his parents that lead to him calling Mrs. Robinson.
One
cinematic reason that this scene works is hold on this shot for a long time
once again making us relate and sympathize for the hero. This is a beat in the story because it
reminds the audience of this world that Ben is unhappy in thus propelling
justifies the following scene in which he takes action and take part in
something against social acceptability propelling the protagonist to begin his
journey.
The
use of weather comes into play in this scene during POV shot of which his
parents are highly overexposed causing a feeling of obtrusiveness. When observing from Ben’s perspective
we the sun is dramatically overexposing the shot. This obtrusive light makes the viewer feel uncomfortable for
two reasons. Firstly, it the
viewer of the pain sensation of sun shining in ones eyes but also causes the
viewer struggle to see the picture on the screen. This sense of discomfort is effective because it helps the
audience feel the extreme discomfort that Ben is feeling at this moment and
once again justify Ben’s decision in the next scene to call Mrs. Robinson.
This
occurs when Ben calls Mrs. Robinson to meet him at the hotel. We see that our hero is uncomfortable
in this situation and nearly calls it off. The major turning point is when Mrs. Robinson challenges his
pride by calling him “inadequate”.
This sparks something inside that challenges him to prove to himself by
having sex with her. This is the
first point that Ben has disregarded what society deems appropriate and takes a
bite of the apple. This marks the first turning point in which the hero has
made a transformation and entered a new world of the story. is taking a bite
out of the apple, and accepting the risks that are involved.
After
this we see a montage of this affair taking place over the summer intercut with
him floating in the pool. The
effect of the montage is to tell the audience that this affair has taken place
over an extended period of time as well as it serves to show that he is happy
for the first time. The sequence
appears to be a somewhat celebration of his, he seems like he’s been freed.
The montage returns to the visual motif
of water but this time he is no longer trapped under water by his parents but
rather he is comfortably floating in the pool with sunglasses to protect
himself from the obtrusive light that disturbed him earlier.
However,
Mrs. Robinson has been established as the antagonist, an unlikeable character
and a member of the plastics so the audience knows that this euphoria cannot last
forever. As
he continues this affair and seems to be enjoying the world around him, his
parents continue to bug him, “ for a boy your age a little resting is okay but
5 weeks come on.. a boy should go take some stalk in himself”. These are the pressures of society
buzzing in again. The result of his parents’ pestering raises the stakes
because it is a reminder that he has not yet escaped from these pressures. The
hero may be pushing them off but the pestering will not go away.
The
stakes are raised higher when Ben realizes that this affair is fulfilling him
on a strictly physical level and has given him no emotional satisfaction from
it. When he tries to connect emotionally with Mrs. Robinson it is clear that
she will not have it. When Mrs. Robinson attacks his pride by implying that he
is not good enough for her daughter.
The hero does not have the inner strength to stick to his guns and leave
her. He angrily tries to end the affair but he does not have the inner strength
to leave. He gets back in
bed and says, “lets not talk about it.
Let’s not talk at all” . ” and then promises “I will never take out
remain Robinson”. The hero has
once again been manipulated by the antagonist and has shown that he is not
powerful enough to overcome her temptations rather the hero has regressed back
this only physical satisfaction.
It is clear at this point that the hero is still missing something.
The
next major beat that raises the stakes is when Ben tries to relax in the pool
as his parents circle him like sharks and pester him about taking Elaine on a date,Ben
is trapped between his parents trying to guide his life decisions and the his
own promise to Mrs. Robinson. “if Ben absolutely refuses to take her
out then I will simply have to invite all the Robinsons over on Thursday”
In
response to his mother’s statement Ben rolls off his raft and sinks back under
the water. Nichols’ is telling the
audience that he has lost another battle and is trapped again by his
parents.
Ben
once again succumbs to the pressures of his parents and takes Elaine out on a
date. This raises the stakes in
the story because the Ben is deliberately going against a promise that he made to
the Mrs. Robinson. This raises the
tension high because the protagonist has made its first clear attack on the
antagonist and is therefore a major step in the rising action.
When
he meets Elaine we are introduced to the first character that, like Ben, the
audience is intended to feel sympathetic towards. In the scene of the date, Ben has now become the unlikeable
character who has taken on the Ben who’s on an affair… when Ben realizes how he
has hurt Elaine the act quickly stops.
One of the reasons this is important because the two of them are very
alike. They are two kids who have
grown up in the world of “plastics” and don’t really seem to fit in. This shocks Ben to discover someone
with true emotion and although he may not know it now, it is what he has been
looking for. The introduction to Elaine therefore sparks the drive of Ben
to do right and make right of his mistakes… they both are deep down trying to
get out of this world that they are trapped in. This scene, according to the Hero’s Journey, is when the
hero meets his soul mate. The role
of the soul mate is to “encourage the hero to move forward” and this is exactly
what Elaine has done. She has inadvertently
shown him that by taking part in an affair he is being superficial and avoiding
true emotional investment, he realizes what he wants and is redirected on his
journey.
The
date scene leads to the next major beat in which the antagonist makes the first
direct attack on the protagonist… Mrs. Robinson tries to stop the second date by
threatening to tell Elaine everything”.
He responds by going to Elaine and telling her first, while he knows
this is will likely tear apart his work so far to achieve, Elaine, the object
of his desires, he accepts the consequences in order to be true to Elaine. At this point both of Ben’s worlds have
collided, his past superficial affair with Mrs. Robinson and his new love for Elaine.
This point is the temptation to overcome in which the “hero often misled
eventually overcomes his lack of and his fear and begins to accept the role of
the hero”. Ben no longer
gives into the traps of those superficial forces around him but takes arms
against the Mrs. Robinson to chose honest over cowardice.
Elaine’s
anger from finding this out puts Ben in the midpoint
of the story. He has taken action
trying to do what’s right and it seems that he has lost everything. This puts the character in a position
of which motivation to achieve the hero’s goal is seemingly lost.
Rain
is used in this scene in a way that is commonly seen in movies. It is the dark point in the story and
everything, all hopes and dreams seem to be raining down on him. The use of weather may be a cliché
(especially at the midpoint of a movie) but in this case it seems to work well
to set the depressed tone of the scene.
After
Ben has left he sees that Elaine is moving away. A shot of his father cleaning the pool is behind him,
reminding the audience of the world he’s found himself back in, and Elaine is
in front of him which represents the Ben’s object of desire. This the moment when Ben has a sense of
clarity and can View the world of the
Picture. Ben stands once again
between the two worlds and makes a decision to himself. He goes to his parents and says:
Ben:
I’m
going to marry Elaine Robinson
Mr.
Braddock: Ben
this whole idea seems pretty half baked.
Ben:
No its not. Its completely baked.
It’s a decision I’ve made.
Mrs.
Braddock:
Well what makes you think she wants to marry you?
Ben:
She
doesn’t. To be perfectly honest she doesn’t like me.
At this point the hero as transitioned further from the
self-conscious world of the plastics.
He doesn’t care how foolish his plan sounds to his parents, he has made
up his own mind and no outside influence or manipulation will change it.
The
point of which we see Ben driving off towards Berkeley marks the beginning of
the third act. From here there
will be a series of beats that raise the stakes, take the hero further away
from his first world and challenge his will to succeed. This will continue
until the hero reaches the climax, his final battle with the antagonist to
obtain the object of the hero’s desire.
Ben goes to Berkeley to convince Elaine to marry him.
First
time that states are raised is when Ben learns that Elaine has a boyfriend and
tells Ben to just leave her alone.
This does not stop the Ben, he is set on his mission and manages to meet
with her, here finds out that Elaine has a boyfriend and that he should just go
home. As a hero, Ben refuses to
give up this easily. According to A Hero’s Journey this is the refusal of the return. The
protagonist has had a failed attempt to obtain the object of his desire and
will now have and learned that she will be harder to get to then he originally
had thought. This once again
raises the stakes.
The
final raising of the stakes before the sequence of the climax is when Mr.
Robinson comes to him. Mr.
Robinson tells him that he and Mrs. Robinson are getting a divorce because of
him, he threatens to put Ben behind bars, and into prison. An interesting note-this scene demonstrates
the effective direction of Nichol’s and his ability to make an audience
sympathize with the man who had an affair rather than the man who’s been
cheated on.
At
this point in time the character has been fully developed from a man trapped in
a society of “plastics” to a man who will do what is necessary to stand up and
get what he wants. The final
transformation has been made and now it is time for the climax to test whether
he has what it takes to go against his old world and stand up against his
antagonist to achieve the object of his desire.
The
climax uses a variety of cinematic elements in order to heighten this scene to
the highest intensity out of all the scenes thus far. First of all, we know that Elaine will be getting married
any minute and if Ben doesn’t make it then all will be lost. This technique is called the ticking
clock, it adds a sense of both
urgency to the sequence.
Secondly,
we are never shown the wedding until Ben gets there. Many times a director would use parallel editing in a
chase/pursuit sequence but in this case it is more effective to leave the
audience wondering when it could happen.
It’s the same idea as in Jaws when people are sent into the water, but
the audience knows that there is still a man-eating shark in there and does not
know when it is going to attack.
The tension is raised because of the unknown.
Thirdly,
one of the most influential tools and likely more subconscious tools used in
this scene is the use of sound.
The sound is fast paced and loud through the entire pursuit sequence unitl
Benjamin arrives at the church. At
this point the music is completely removed. This is the most dramatic scene in the movie and there is
literally no music—a brave directorial decision. This works though because the silence acts as a vacuum for
the audience, all of the attention is directed to Ben and his final attempt to
win Elaine over. Actually, not
quite all of the music is removed, there are three chords that are abrasive and
staccato. The effect of these
reminds me of the high squeaks in the shower scene of psycho, they are
unpleasant, and unexpected surprise and unease in the viewer.
The
crossing the threshold is when he wards off Mrs. Robinson with a cross and
fights his way out of the church.
The hero goes against the main antagonizing theme of feeling
trapped. He is now doing what he
wants to do and fighting against the world of the story has escaped the
entrapment and manipulation of the plastics. This point is the rebirth of Ben as a hero.
Finally,
the resolution of the story occurs very quickly. It is just one shot of the two of them riding in the
bus. First they are smiling from
ear to ear. And then their smiles
slowly fade. Theyn they are
straight faced and look at eacher with an awkward expression. Finally, Ben has the same face that
resembles that from the first shot of the movie when he sits emotionless on the
airplane. The questions that are
raised include: what was the real purpose of eachother’s attraction? Was it because they loved each other or
were they both trying to escape from the pressures of their parents? Personaly, I believe that Nichols was
trying to show us that they both were going for each other because it
represented a way in which they could break from the controls of others. It was about an act of rebellion of
which they both needed to take part of.
The uncomfortable expressions of which they make near the end shows that
these two people are still strangers to an extent. Elaine was the object of Ben’s desire but his real dramatic
need was to do something on his own without the influence of others. She was like the suitcase in Pulp
Fiction, it was not important what the contents were in the suitcase but rather
it was the transformation that it caused in the main characters.
The purpose of this paper was to Benjamin Braddock’s journey in The
Graduate in order to understand how and why this story structure was
successful. This was done by
using a variety of sources such as
The Hero with A Thousand Faces, A
Hero’s Journey, and
information provided by the lectures in class. The story seemed to fit into the structures proposed in this
material and illustrates the point that having a strong structure can be a
successful tool in drawing an audience in and grabbing onto them throughout
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